User:Halo1081/Sandbox/Events/Reviews

Hello everyone, Halo here with my scores. Before I begin, I'm going to show you list of just a few other creatures of the night you could have used if you didn't think outside the box. In general there is a whole array, so I hope seeing this list will remind you to expand a bit more:


 * Bat
 * Owl
 * Nyx (Greek goddess of the night)
 * Ghost
 * Werewolf
 * Incubus/Succubus
 * Black Cat
 * Gargoyle
 * Zombie
 * Willow-o'-the-wisp
 * Hitodama
 * Yuki-onna (yes they are night creatures)
 * Black Butterfly

And he list goes on. Kudos to everyone who were savvy enough to pick up a likely pattern and go with something different, and kudos to everyone who just went with something different.

Round 2 Theme:

Create a coord for a creature of the night and fits the requirement below:


 * 1) Perform the songs Glass Doll & Eternally Flickering Flame
 * 2) Hand drawn coords are not optional for this round
 * 3) Eliminations begin this round
 * 1) Eliminations begin this round

Tyler James Carter - Nightmare Vampire Coord
For starters, I actually think you could've done a lot more with this than just make it a vampire coord. Based on the top alone, I would've suggested a black butterfly-themed coord because black butterflies mean a variety of things based on the culture that ties in with the theme. In some places they're a death warning, in some they are what the souls of the dead become if they fail to reach their afterlife (Bleach actually references this with their hell butterflies). Witches are also associated with black butterflies according to various folklore. In order to steal food or other stuff, they would camouflage themselves as black butterfly so no one would know it was them. This is especially evident if black butterflies appear around the house at night. There's a lot to go by.

I would've recommended you used those black cute-type heels instead of the ankle boots you chose because the purple and design doesn't mesh with the overall dark colors that the rest of the coord uses an the same thing goes for the accessory. The pink in the skirt is turn away for me considering the fact that it like the boots, the pink clashes with the over darkness of the coord. I would've recommended a dark purple skirt to bring out that bit of purple in the top, or a black skirt with gold accents. Other than that, the coord is balanced quite nicely.


 * A - 3
 * T - 4
 * O - 3

Mikitty092393 - Jewelry Vampire Princess Coord
Overall this is a very well balanced coord, but that's mainly because the top and bottom are technically from the same brand (Love Moonrise is the evolved version of Love Queen) which is gonna bring you down. I would've suggested making the coord all red with that top and making a blood moon-based coord with it being a nod to werewolves or just a blood-based coord with it being a nod to vampires. Both are a different use from the traditional. There's also another black ruffled skirt that resembles the one you used and I would've recommended that too. Overall there's a lot you could've done with this coord too and still keep it a regal-themed coord that tied in with the theme. Also I think red shoes would've been a better choice then the brown ones to bring out the top and go with the accessory.


 * A - 4
 * T - 4
 * O - 3

DivintasX - Bat Rock Coord
Literally the only bat coord in the entire round and I have to say, wow. You really utilized the mismatched and funky patterns extremely well and I really like it. My only complaint is the shirt which feels too plain compared to the rest of coord, but there aren't that many tops that match the colors and designs so not much can be said in regards to that. The fact that you used a bat instead of a vampire is my main thing, because you took the obvious and used it for something straightforward. On a regular day, that would get low originality, but because of your coord in general, and the fact that like mentioned it's the only bat coord here, you get a really good score for it.


 * A - 4
 * T - 5
 * O - 4

Kiriya531 - Sparkling Moonrise Werewolf Coord
The color palette is very nice, definitely befitting of it's name but like with Mikitty, that's because Love Moonrise and Love Queen are technically the same brand which will be what brings down your originality. Other than that, my only real complaint are the shoes which don't fit the rest of the coord in both color and style. I actually think you could have used a top from Futuring Girl instead of one Love Queen top and then choose some pumps or sandals instead of those boots. Maybe a light blue to bring out that sash. I also would have suggested utilizing one of the double ribbon accessories and use them as ears, because there are some that fit better than the cat ears which doesn't fit with the rest of coord. Overall though it's a lovely coord and kudos for doing something other than a witch or vampire.


 * A - 3
 * T - 4
 * O - 4

Kht48 - Sparkling Ghost Coord
First off, I love the way you descended in color. That was very clever and a real nod to ghost and how they're portrayed to be transparent at their feet. I love the overall design as well. You put an LG accessory that wasn't bat wings to good use and it really ties the entire outfit together. If I had to pick one thing that doesn't sit with me it's the sparkly top which goes against all the lace and solid texture, but without it I don't think the coord could be called the "Sparkling Ghost Coord."


 * A - 4
 * T - 5
 * O - 5

Chrismh - Mischievous Howl Coord
To begin I just want to say kudos for being savvy and going outside the box. Secondly, my favorite thing about this coord is the top which goes with the accessory. I honestly think that if you brought out that green with a navy skirt, you could've really brought out the "mischief" in the coord. I would've also suggested the shoes from DC's Heartful Key Coord to bring out both the top and ears as well because the giant polka dots in the pumps seem to go against the rest of coord. Overall though, the palette is nice and like the design you were going for.


 * A - 3
 * T - 5
 * O - 4

Snowflakes519 - Golden Full-Moon Werewolf Coord
Without a doubt this is one of my favorites of this round. I love the design, the color scheme, you even got creative by using a ribbon to represent the ears. Everything is perfect and everything goes together very well. My only complaint is the shoes. How light it is goes against how dark and bold everything else is. I would've recommended the Orange Stage Boots which would've brought out the skirt or the Girls' Magic Boots. Other than that, fantastic coord. Because of the bright colors, this can easily be used in the Halloween Eternal Light. Good job.


 * A - 4
 * T - 5
 * O - 5

Soleilislove - Celeste Witch Coord
This is a cute coord. It actually reminds me of Ojamajo Doremi and I really like that. Your top especially is very witch-like and that's a very strong point. I like the shoes you chose as well, it really brings out the top. The skirt is my only complaint as it's too dark against all the light. I would've recommended Magical Toy's Wonder Coord Skirt because it would've brought out both the top and the shoes or Happy Rainbow's Funky Blue Coord skirt to match up the entire thing. I like that you used pop and cute cards instead of the popular cool and sexy cards. As a person who commonly uses those, I enjoy seeing people who can utilize them and still get wonderful results.


 * A - 4
 * T - 4
 * O - 4

Tomochin - Velvet Dancer Coord
I love the way you matched everything up. The color scheme is nice and your palette is gorgeous. I probably would've suggested Aurora Fantasy's Blue Fairy Coord's boots so you can complete the sort of gradient effect it has. However, because you didn't make this a coord for a creature of the night, I'll have to take away points. With that skirt though, you could have made a general coord that was a nod to nearly every night creature out there and stay within the theme as the moon does play some big roles in folklore about night creatures.


 * A - 4
 * T - 2
 * O - 5

Abcioh12 - Starlight Witch Coord
In terms of aesthetics, this is one of the best. All the articles fit very well together and next to nothing looks out of place. My only complaint is the boots which clash against the otherwise metallic vibe. I would've suggested the solid black boots from the White Parade Coord or the sandals from the Shiny Black Coord which also has that metallic feel. Other thn that everything is well balanced. From the articles, I think you could have turned this coord into a black cat-themed coord rather than a witch-themed coord, but it would still be a nod to witches since black cats are often depicted as their familiars. A two-for-one deal, I would say.


 * A - 4
 * T - 4
 * O - 3

Jack Lorde - Ancient Vlad Joker Coord
Firstly, thanks for the description. It really helps. Secondly, The top and shoes match each other wonderfully, but the shorts however go against the overall vibe and theme of the coord. Granted there isn't many things outside of Magical Toy that can contribute to a coord like this so there isn't much that can be said. The shoes help kick off the hat due to the yellow/yellow-orange the boots have or else it would have otherwise been too light. This is very original as I doubt anyone else here thought about a Dracula-revived clown. You could perform this in the Halloween Eternal Light and I'm sure Kaede would be proud.


 * A - 3
 * T - 4
 * O - 5

Musicxanimexme - Undead Diva Coord
You know there are black brandless cool shoes that resemble the heels on the gladiator shoes that you could've used an it save you the trouble, but eh, it works. Anyway, a zombie-based coord; I like it. The top you chose really screams "zombie" due to the colors and I like the fact that you went with pants rather than a skirt. The bright blue ribbons, though it goes with the coord's theme, they clash with the coord sans for the earrings. Overall though you have a good balanced coord befitting an undead diva and kudos for thinking outside the box.


 * A - 4
 * T - 4
 * O - 5

Hikaru Kinhana - Nightsky Witch Coord
The third witch coord of this round. While I like the color palatte you were going for, I think it would've been best to keep to the dark blue or use something like the Kaleido Mirror skirt which utilizes dark and light colors that match your palette or the Astrologer Coord Skirt which fits the material of the top and would've descended the colors beautifully and it keep with your theme. The skirt you chose doesn't properly blend in the purple and I would've recommended that you use shoes richer purple like the accessory because the dull colors aren't too pleasing against such a rich coord. With the top alone I would've recommended either a succubus or incubus-themed coord as it has that potential.


 * A - 3
 * T - 4
 * O - 3

NightBellRose - Ayakashi Moonlit Coord
There are quite a few things with the name "Ayakashi" so I'm not sure which one you're referring to. In any case though, your coord is very well matched and is one of the best matched cords of this round. The top, skirt, and shoes fit very well together and don't look out of place. I'm impressed. Even the accessory looks good. The only thing that's keeping you from getting full points is the lack of clarification for what your coord is based of. Other than that, a very attractive piece.


 * A - 5
 * T - 3
 * O - 5

Fukaru - Mysterious Succubus Coord
Uh-oh, we got ourselves a succubus coord and I'll be real, it looks great. It really fits the whole image of succubi and the lyrics of both songs are actually more alluding than one might think. Succubi seduce men and another term for "seduce" can be "trap" or "ensnare" and that's what chains and birdcages do. You made an indirect reference to succubi just by utilizing the lyrics and that's very creative. Not to mention, but your pieces all look really good together as well. Nothing is out of place and you did really well in matching the articles. I truly love that. My only complaint are the horns as because of their design which throws off the rest of coord.


 * A - 4
 * T - 5
 * O - 5

Yuzuki-Hime-Sama - Ghastly Starlight Coord
While I like the top due to the light colors, the skirt and shoes don't go with it. I would've recommended a more "fluffy" skirt or bottom to accent the top and then pastel boots or sandals to finish it off. The accessory is an interesting choice, and it goes with the skirt, but not the top and shoes. For a ghost-themed coord, I feel there were many other options you had to choose from considering that ghost alone. It doesn't give off a "great fright" feel either. I think with the top alone you could have turned this into a yuki onna-themed coord. Since they appear on snowy nights, had you matched the top with fluffy pastels you could've made quite the cute coord.


 * A - 2
 * T - 3
 * O - 4

MidnightDreamStarlit - Midnight Succubus Coord
Another succubus coord, but with a different angle. All your articles go really well together, but the shiny skirt goes against the top and shoes, turning off some of the outfit's visual appeal. I like that you decided to use the heart of a succubus for your approach and that dictated a lot of your article choices and colors which turns this into something more original. It's different and I don't think any one else would have tried something like that. Kudos.


 * A - 4
 * T - 4
 * O - 5

Ruruzuzu - Night Sorceress Coord
For starters your shoes really don't go with the rest of the coord. Both in color and design they go against the the rest of the coord. Secondly, I think a dark blue top that fades into another color would've been a better choice. You would match the hat and the skirt and still keep your coord. Thirdly, because "sorceress" and "witch" are interchangeable terms, I'll be taking off some originality points.


 * A - 3
 * T - 3
 * O - 2

SingMeloetta - Willow Wisp Coord
One of the two most original-based pieces in the entire round. I love that you based these on the willow-o'-the-wisp and your color choices for the coord really represents them. Your coord pieces fit together wonderfully and I love how the color descends. There isn't any thing I would recommend other than an airy top with a slightly darker color, but since such a thing doesn't exist not much can be said. Regardless lovely coord and lovely theme. I hope this coord will guide everyone out of the dark palace.


 * A - 4
 * T - 5
 * O - 5

Pop'nJuriMiya - Night Melody Coord
I like the colors you chose, but the sparkling skirt really goes against the solid colors and casual vibe. A solid blue skirt would've been a better choice. With the top and accessory, I think you could have based this coord on Nyx, the Greek goddess personification of Night, however since this isn't based on a creature or being of the dark, you'll have point's taken of for theme.


 * A - 4
 * T - 1
 * O - 2

Phoenixcandyrose - Witching Hour Coord
The second coord I've seen that uses a completely original theme. The fact that you based this off of the witching hour which is when witches, demons ghost are at their peak of power and black magic is at its strongest is not only original, but you knocked out several different creatures by using this. I like how you gave each of the pieces a specific purpose, yet the skirt doesn't really mesh with the to and shoes. It seems too casual compared to them due to the design. Something like the Marine Denim Skirt might have been a better option and it could've still represented the clouds. Either way, I like this coord and your theme.


 * A - 4
 * T - 4
 * O - 5

Eight2 - Shine Witch Coord
Shout out to Mizuki's Shine Witch Coord from Sleeping Beauty. Moving on, your color palette is very nice and all the pieces fit really nicely together. I like the fading into sparkles effect your top and skirt invoke. Intentional or not, that was very clever and adds to your coord's aesthetics. I'm upset this is a witch-based coord though as it'll bring down your originality points.


 * A -
 * T -
 * O -

Nattysakura - Sexy Crow Witch Coord
As tedious as duplicates are, I'm not gonna fault you as they have no direct affect to the coord itself. Anyway, while I like your palette and the overall look of the coord, no article is out of place and they all look really good together, but because you used all sexy cards and two of them are from Spicy Ageha, I'm gonna have to take off points for originality and that's without the fact that you made a witch-based coord.


 * A - 5
 * T - 3
 * O - 1

MikuruIchigo - Blood Queen Coord
To get started, I just want to say I love the red. The articles you chose really fit well together and it's an attractive coord. My only complaint are the shoes which are more fuchsia than red. I think you could have gotten away with some black sandals/or pumps and the coord still be just as stunning, but other than that this is a lovely coord. I love how it's a nod to vampires and not directly a vampire-based coord. Kudos for being indirect


 * A - 4
 * T - 4
 * O - 4

Pri-aira - Elegant Vampire Coord
It looks as though you chose three random pieces and placed in them in a random coord. The top and tiara look good together, but the rest doesn't. I would've recommended that you utilize the brandless cards and/or Sangria Rose for the skirt. The shoes are okay, but a richer purple would've been better. Add the lack of aesthetics to the fact this is supposed to be a vampire coord and your score is very low all round.


 * A - 2
 * T - 3
 * O - 1

RCTY - Lacy Maid Coord
It's got a Gothic vibe going, but from what I remember I think you mentioned that this wasn't a creature of the night coord. Believe it or not, minus the skirt as I used shorts, this is actually identical to an old Good Coord I submitted for the GCWC a while back. Probably just a coincidence though. Anyway, the skirt is too rich compared to the duller colors of the top and it's more extravagant compare to the simplicity of the rest of the coord, but other than that it's a decent coord.


 * A - 4
 * T - 1
 * O - 3

MikuruMiracle - Midnight Vampire Coord
You did what I would have suggested to another piece in this round and it looks fabulous. I like the color descend, that's really nice, but compared to the sparkling top and skirt, your shoes look rather plain. However since I know there aren't many glittery shoes that can compliment this unless they originate from a glittery coord, then it's justified. However since it's a vampire-based coord originality points are going to be lowered.


 * A - 4
 * T - 3
 * O - 2

Williukea - Eternal Star Coord
While I like that you were going with a zombie theme, I honestly think you should have chosen another skirt that matched the top or a duller colored top that compliments military green because the top and the skirt do not go together in color, but they do match in design. A colorful zombie however is new and actually reminds of Kore ga Zombie desu ka so your originality points don't budge. Kudos for thinking outside the box.


 * A - 2
 * T - 3
 * T - 5

Shmowh kg - Vampire Knight Coord
While duplicates are tedious, I'm not gonna take off points for it because to me it's as though it's out of spite and don't think that's fair as it doesn't have any direct affect to the coord itself. Anyway I love the accessories you chose as it really brings the coord together. However, the silver in the top goes against the skirt. I would've recommended you take advantage of the shine and use something metallic for the bottoms. For shoes, the dark purple doesn't really match the lighter purple of the top so something that was closer to it might have been better. As another vampire coord though, your originality points are going to suffer quite a bit.


 * A - 3
 * T - 4
 * O - 2

Strawberry Akari - 24/7 Suite Owl Coord
You've already been told about the purple skirt that's identical to the one in this coord that you could have used, so I'm not gonna suggest it. But had you known about it then your coord would've looked outstanding. Other than that your top and shoes match really well. I like that you decided to use an owl for inspiration, very original and the only one here too. Owls are the lesser-known creatures of the night, but that doesn't make them any less of such. Owls are messengers of change and act as spiritual guides (one of my spirit animals happens to be an owl). They're depicted as being messengers of death in many cultures and that death as interpreted as being a transition and as a nocturnal animal they also symbolize shadows and otherworldliness. They're also depicted with departed souls and is viewed as the animals that carry them to the underworld and are also associated with witchcraft in some cultures (if Harry Potter didn't hint at that). So, even though they may not seem like night creatures, they are and kudos for taking advantage of that.


 * A - 3
 * T - 4
 * O - 5

Heyo everyone, Halo here with her outstandingly late scores that were supposed to be here a few days ago, but I ended up losing everything. Anyway, I'm not posting my opinions with these so if you want them, please leave a notice and I'll tell you directly.

Create a marine or sea-theme/styled coord that also fits these requirements:
 * Round 3 Theme:


 * 1) Perform the song Poppin' Bubbles
 * 2) Hand drawn coords are not optional for this round
 * 1) Hand drawn coords are not optional for this round

Create a date coord that also fits these requirements:
 * Round 4 Theme:


 * 1) Perform the song Melody of Heart
 * 2) Hand drawn coords are not optional for this round
 * 1) Hand drawn coords are not optional for this round

Snowflakes519 - Colorful Jellyfish Coord

 * A - 5
 * T - 5
 * O - 5

Chrismh - Angelic Waters Coord

 * A - 4
 * T - 4
 * O - 5

Mikitty092393 - Monstro’s Legacy Coord

 * A - 5
 * T - 4
 * O - 4

Jack Lorde - Madame Leviathan Coord

 * A - 2
 * T - 3
 * O - 5

Tomochin - Siren Triumph Coord

 * A - 5
 * T - 4
 * O - 5

SingMeloetta - Nighttime Ocean Coord

 * A - 3
 * T - 3
 * O - 5

Kht48 - Rainbow Reef Coord

 * A - 4
 * T - 5
 * O - 5

Phoenixcandyrose - Watery Kappa Coord

 * A - 3
 * T - 2
 * O - 5

Musicxanimexme - Frozen Waters Coord

 * A - 3
 * T - 3
 * O - 4

MikuruMiracle - Fresh Naiad Coord

 * A - 4
 * T - 4
 * O - 4

Pop’nJuriMiya - Poseidon Pearl Coord

 * A - 3
 * T - 4
 * O - 5

Yuzuki-Hime-Sama - Shining Angler Coord

 * A - 3
 * T - 3
 * O - 5

Fukaru - Elegant Octo Coord

 * A - 4
 * T - 4
 * O - 5

Eight2 - Dreamy Clownfish Coord

 * A - 4
 * T - 5
 * O - 5

NightBellRose - Wadanohara Angel Coord

 * A - 4
 * T - 3
 * O - 5

Hikaru Kinhana - Clear Shell Coord

 * A - 5
 * T - 5
 * O - 4

Abcioh12 - Starry Night Mermaid Coord

 * A - 3
 * T - 3
 * O - 4

RCTY - Beach Walk Leisure Coord

 * A - 3
 * T - 4
 * O - 5

Tyler James Carter - Water Fairy Coord

 * A - 4
 * T - 4
 * O - 4

MidnightDreamStarlit - Royal Dreamin’ Coord

 * A - 3
 * T - 3
 * O - 4

DivinitasX - Yellow Submarine Coord

 * A - 5
 * T - 4
 * O - 5

Shmowh kg - Colorful Fish Coord

 * A - 3
 * T - 4
 * O - 4

MikuruIchigo - Water Nymph Coord

 * A - 4
 * T - 4
 * O - 4

Soleilislove - Cerulean Tides Coord

 * A - 3
 * T - 4
 * O - 3

Pri-aira - Shadow Bubbles Coord

 * A - 1
 * T - 2
 * O - 0

Williukea - Kymopoleia Storm Coord

 * A - 3
 * T - 4
 * O - 5

Ruruzuzu - Sea Treasure Coord

 * A - 4
 * T - 5
 * O - 4

Strawberry Akari - Pink Corsola Coord

 * A - 5
 * T - 4
 * O - 5

Kiriya531 - Happy Shining Waves Coord

 * A - 4
 * T - 5
 * O - 3

Musicxanimexme - Street Cute Coord

 * A - 2
 * T - 0
 * O - 2

Abcioh12 - City Love Coord

 * A - 5
 * T - 4
 * O - 3

Soleilislove - Smiling Symphony Coord

 * A - 5
 * T - 4
 * O - 5

Yuzuki-Hime-Sama - Unbalanced Love Coord

 * A - 3
 * T - 3
 * O - 4

SingMeloetta - Hopeful Love Coord

 * A - 4
 * T - 4
 * O - 4

NightBellRose - Scarlet Lovely Coord

 * A - 4
 * T - 3
 * O - 4

DivinitasX - Ribbon Confidence Coord

 * A - 4
 * T - 3
 * O - 4

RCTY - Creamy Pink Coord

 * A - 5
 * T - 4
 * O - 4

Mikitty092393 - Lavender Love Coord

 * A - 4
 * T - 5
 * O - 4

Ruruzuzu - Sunshine Marmalade Coord

 * A - 5
 * T - 4
 * O - 5

Pri-aira - Sweet Relationship Coord

 * A - 2
 * T - 3
 * O - 2

Williukea - Black & Pink Coord

 * A - 4
 * T - 3
 * O - 4

Snowflakes519 - British Autumn Coord

 * A - 3
 * T - 5
 * O - 5

Tyler James Carter - Western Romance Coord

 * A - 4
 * T - 3
 * O - 5

Fukaru - Warm Romance Coord

 * A - 2
 * T - 4
 * O - 3

Tomochin - Tender Autumn Coord

 * A - 4
 * T - 5
 * O - 4

Kht48 - Magenta Berries Coord

 * A - 3
 * T - 2
 * O - 3

Chrismh - Purest Innocence Coord

 * A - 4
 * T - 4
 * O - 5

Pop’nJuriMiya - Kirakira Tomboy Coord

 * A - 4
 * T - 4
 * O - 5

Kiriya531 - Cold and Minty Heart Coord

 * A - 3
 * T - 3
 * O - 4

Hikaru Kinhana - Blooming Feeling Coord

 * A - 4
 * T - 3
 * O - 5

Jack Lorde - Paris Breakfast Coord

 * A - 3
 * T - 4
 * O - 5

Shmowh kg - Romantic Floral Coord

 * A - 4
 * T - 5
 * O - 5

Eight2 - Lovely Lavender Coord

 * A - 5
 * T - 4
 * O - 5

Phoenixcandyrose - Ocean Heartthrob Coord

 * A - 4
 * T - 4
 * O - 4

Miruku ichigo - Beating Heart Coord

 * A - 4
 * T - 3
 * O - 4

MidnightDreamStarlit - Dream Desire Coord

 * A - 3
 * T - 4
 * O - 4

MikuruMiracle - Loving Melody Coord

 * A - 3
 * T - 3
 * O - 4

StrawberryAkari - Sky Blue Valentine Coord

 * A - 3
 * T - 3
 * O - 4

<!--=Round 5= And I am back! Hello everyone, Halo here with her scores. Before I begin with my scores, I would just like to not that to me, this was Round 1 all over again. Translation, the scores are not going to be pleasant.

Tomochin - Heart Catching Coord
This isn't a coord for a tropical island, this is a casual coord that you wear on a casual day in town in the Fall. On that note, I'm not sure how a cardigan and boots fit with an island theme when it doesn't. Despite that, I like how well everything goes together, you did well on that end. The cardigan, skirts, and boots all look together. This is simply a normal outfit.


 * A - 4
 * T - 1
 * O - 3

SingMeloetta - Tropic Princess Coord

 * A - 3
 * T - 4
 * O - 3