Talk:Forbidden Hide & Seek/@comment-28442606-20180227160316/@comment-28442606-20180228040554

1/  Yeah I get that, it just sounds even more jarring (personally) to force into a sentence by adding in more words. I'm not gonna beat a dead horse, but I asked a native speaker and he said it wasn't one sentence. (pic attached)

3/ Even if they are separate lines, using "it" in the later line refers to...the jewel fragments, correct? I think it should at least be "them" (eg turn them all (the smashed fragments) into ash).